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22Oct2009

Trench Coat Seduction 

“I’m a sucker for a nail biting suspense with a love story woven in.  Good think I’m lucky enough to know some talented writers who can help me feed my helpless addiction.  *Grin*  Please help me give a warm welcome to Romantic Suspense Author Misty Evans as she as she blogs today.  Don’t forget to stop by and ask her all about the latest in her Super Agent Series : Proof of Life”. - Nana

 

Trench Coat Seduction 

Any spy worth her secret decoder ring must have a fabulous trench coat in her closet.  I personally have several and love them all, but in writing my Super Agent Series, I had yet to put one of my lady spies in a trench.

Until now. Brigit Kent, the no nonsense psychologist who moonlights for Britain’s Secret Intelligence Service in my latest novel, Proof of Life (Super Agent Series, Book 3), is perfect in a trench. She isn’t a fashionista by any means, but she has deep, dark family secrets and is playing with fire when it comes to blackmailing the deputy director of the CIA, Michael Stone. While I didn’t want her hung up on clothing labels, she was part 007 and part traditional ingénue, and I wanted her to have a signature piece.

Enter the trench. With Brigit’s dark looks, I imagined her as a modern day Audrey Hepburn, using her trench to its fullest. It was sexy and classic, just like Brigit’s character, and both the coat and the woman held the perfect combination to attract Michael.

Moving to the window next to Brigit, Michael tried not to stare at her peaches-and-cream skin, or her thick, dark hair, free of its ponytail and brushing her shoulders. He tried not to examine the way her trench coat molded to her waist and flared out at her hips, emphasizing both. Her body hummed with energy and his happily tightened in response.

The trench worked as a symbol of Brigit’s growth in the story as well as a handy accessory. In the opening, she uses the trench to hide her gun and her generous curves. Internally, she’s also hiding her insecurities and family secrets. As the story goes on, the trench and Brigit take a beating when Brigit is shot at and nearly blown up in an airplane. The coat gets mended and cleaned, and so does Brigit when she divulges her secrets to Michael and saves her sister from a terrorist group.  After all that, she was ready to take more chances, and at one point, I had fun letting her pull a classic Marilyn Monroe when she attends a meeting with the President of the United States.

The trench coat still had the plastic bag over it from the cleaners. She ripped it off and shrugged the coat over her shoulders. The silk lining brushed against her skin, and she wondered if she really had the courage to go to the White House in such a Marilyn Monroe style.

Hell, what did she care? No one would know unless the Secret Service felt her up.

Through the whole story, the trench helped me keep Brigit mysterious and desirable. She needed to be a puzzle Michael had to figure out, or if not completely figure out, at least enjoy trying.

Without a knock, she burst through the door with Helena on her heels and a set look on her face. A look Michael had seen repeatedly from Ruth’s house to Ireland. The soldier was ready to take on the world.

His heart stuttered and then stopped in wonder for a split-second as he took her in from head to toe. The wavy dark curls, the baby doll eyes, the bright lipstick. The gaudy earrings, the expensive trench, the moderate heels. She was still a conundrum. Still beautiful.

The trench coat seduction works and Michael finally understands Brigit and what a future with her holds.

The future stretched out in front of him with endless possibilities. Brigit understood who he was, what he did for a living, what he had survived. She could relate and love him for all his faults, for all his regrets. She gave him hope, and most of all, she gave him back his desire to live again. He couldn’t, wouldn’t, let her go. “Call me as soon as you can get away.”

“Is that an order?”

“Yes,” he said, grinning again so hard his cheeks hurt. “And wear the trench. I like it.”

She squeezed his hand before pulling her own away and saluting him. “Yes, sir.”

I was thrilled when the cover artist for Proof of Life found a dark-haired model wearing a trench for the cover. What makes it even better is the way the woman is lifting the collar to partially hide her face.  While trench coats are often associated with spies, Brigit’s trench coat showcases her personality and symbolizes her internal struggles rather than turning her into a clichéd stock character, and that made her all the more fun to write!

Thanks to Nana for inviting me to guest blog today. In celebration of Proof of Life releasing this week, I’m giving away an ecopy of the story to one lucky reader. Just post a comment or a question and I’ll add your name to the hat.

Misty Evans is an award-winning, multi-published author of CIA thrillers and paranormal comedy. Visit her at www.readMistyEvans.com or join her Yahoo! Group at http://groups.yahoo.com/group

 

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Reader Comments (19)

That *is* a perfect cover image for Brigit. I love the look of a good trenchcoat, and I love how you've interwoven the trenchcoat throughout the story and how it ties in with Brigit's character.

This book is a Must Read for me.

October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterKeith Melton

Hi Keith!

Trench coats have shown up in all kinds of stories, like pulp fiction and noir, and continue to add a bit of an edge to both male and female characters in contemporary stories.

I can see you looking all Bogey in one!

October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterMisty Evans

Misty,

You know I'm a fan. I can't wait to read proof of Life.

Autumn Jordon
www.autumnjordon.com
2009 Golden Heart Finalist

October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterAutumn Jordon

Aw, thanks Autumn. I can't wait to read your novel, Evil's Witness, either!

October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterMisty Evans

Hey Girlfriend!
Great posting on trenchcoats----I will never look at them as just a totally cool fashion statement ever again. And to anybody out there who hasn't snagged copies of Misty's incredibly awesome CIA thrillers, just let me tell you this---run as quickly as possible, do not walk, to the nearest store and get copies. You won't ever regret it!

Hugs to you, Misty! Ellen

October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterEllen Dye

As a fashionista-wanna-be, I have several trench coats, Ellen! I love them for their style and that dash of intrigue and mystery they give me. Plus, I can hide my figure under them. LOL.

Thanks for stopping by!

October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterMisty Evans

Misty, I like how you combined your fashionista and author skills in this blog -- you've made me proud that my only coat IS a gorgeous soft suede trenchcoat. Alas, it's tan rather than black...

Laurie, hoping your next fashion blog will talk about trenchcoats as well!

October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterLaurie Schnebly Campbell

Brilliant use of a garment, Misty! Just one of the reasons your books rock!

October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterRee Mancini

Laurie, the tan or beige trench coat is a true classic. Many leading ladies of film more often than not wore tan or white trenches on and off screen. Catherine Deneuve, Brigit Bardot, and the sexiest Hollywood starlet ever, Marilyn. So you're in great company!

I have a wonderful tan one as well - and the best feature is the lining is multi-colored polka dots. I love the inside as much as the outside! If you want to add a splash of color to yours, just tie on a bright belt. You'll add a slice of sun to everyone's day. :)

And yes, I'll talk about the timeless trench on my monthly fashion column at www.solestruckfashions.com November 5th!

Thanks for stopping by!

October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterMisty Evans

Ree, thank you for the compliment on my books. You know I tend to mix my love of fashion with my love of storytelling. I live vicariously through my heroine's that way!

October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterMisty Evans

I love this! How cool the way you tuned into the ultimate metaphor. I've already started Proof of Life and am loving it. Of course, you know I fell for Michael Stone in the first book of the series, Operation Sheba! Now digging into the third book and once again, I'm swept away. Misty, your books are so freaking cool!!

Don't add my name to the contest, I preordered your book. *wink*

A greedy reader who wants more Misty Evans!! *grin*

--Chiron O'Keefe
The Write Soul: www.chironokeefe.blogspot.com

October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterChiron O'Keefe

Chiron, you made my day! Thank you for already buying Proof of Life. Sure hope you enjoy it!

I'm at work on the next Super Agent book, so fingers crossed Smitty gets his story too. :)

October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterMisty Evans

Audrey Hepburn as 007. Love it! Great symbolic use of a coat!

October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterMimi

Thanks, Mimi!

October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterMisty Evans

Totally fun post Misty -- I love stories like this -- CIA action adventure, with hot, revealing-trench-coat lovin' - what's not to love!

Happy Friday!

~bella

October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterBella

Absolutely, Bella! Me, too.

And even though I would stink at being a spy, I still love to wear me a sexy trench coat and pretend. :)

October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterMisty Evans

I love how Misty weaves her love of fashion into her books. It's great fun to read. :)

October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterMichelle Miles

Ok, after reading about Laurie's trench coat and Misty answer, I think I need to go shopping. LOL

AJ

October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterAutumn Jordon

The winner of Friday's giveaway is....(drum roll, please...)

BELLA *applause*

Congratulations, Bella. Please send me an email at misty@readMistyEvans.com and I'll send you your free ecopy of PROOF OF LIFE! Thanks to all for stopping by and posting. I had a wonderful time.

October 26, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterMisty Evans

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